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Wednesday, February 4, 2009

The Truth

The string tied to her index finger,
She draws it out of the spool at her will.
She loops it, folds it, stretches it, breaks it,
Then fastens it again to her finger.

I came and she placed me gently
On the wobbly string.
I wobbled. Adjusted. Made my niche,
And then, grew too big for the string.

Now I stand beside her,
Plucking the string she preserves,
Pulling the string from her,
Forcing my will upon it.

And yet the string is not mine
Nor hers, we both know.
But it lies there between us,
Forcing us to hurt each other.

10 comments:

Preeti said...

Beautiful...thats all i want to say...

PS: you are a serious soul, arent you..? i have found a thin grim thread running through most of your writings...

Menaka said...

Thank you...

Grim!!! Really? Yeah i guess i can be thoda serious, the 'thinking kind'... But i hope I'm not grim! atleast not too much... :)

Preeti said...

:)

thinkers end up being understood as grim (deliberately minused the 'mis' from understood) ... :)

ya the seriousness is kinda apparent. and the humour (not referring to this one but the other posts) is certainly dark as well as satirical and a little tongue in cheek...

nevertheless i like the way you write...its different because it has a newness about it...

:) keep going!!!

Shrey said...
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Shrey said...

Menaka.. You a serious soul? :| And I never realised that in 3 years? Damn :p

Menaka said...

Why thank you, Preeti... its very heartening really :)

@Shrey: Sheh! Just shows how observant you are and how much you have noticed me Sheh!

Pratz said...

too serious this one ( and i really didnt understand the exact meaning conveyed)

Preeti said...

errmm...

you havent updated...???
:p

Menaka said...

nothing is coming...

writer's block... laziness... not sure... but will post soon promise :)

Preeti said...

aah...ZE BLOCK!!!

:-)

ok. take your time...

:-)